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| Criterion | Score |
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| Accuracy | 9/10 |
| Fluency | 9/10 |
| Terminology | 9/10 |
| Formatting | 8/10 |
| Overall | 8.9/10 |
Summary: The translation is of high quality overall, accurately conveying all technical content in the modified sections with natural Persian phrasing. The main issue is a spurious 'from numba import jit' import added to the update function code cell in the Multithreaded Loops section that does not appear in the English source. There is also a minor terminological inconsistency where the heading 'تعیین نوع' (type determination) does not match the body text's correct use of 'استنتاج نوع' (type inference) in the Typing subsection. The formatting is well-preserved with proper MyST directives and mathematical notation intact. Technical terminology is consistently and correctly translated throughout all modified sections, following the reference glossary (e.g., 'برداریسازی' for vectorization, 'کامپایلر در زمان اجرا' for JIT compiler) Mathematical notation and LaTeX equations are perfectly preserved across all modified sections including the quadratic map and wealth update equations The admonition block ('توضیح' for 'Remark') and note blocks are correctly translated with appropriate MyST directive formatting maintained The Sharp Bits section and its subsections (Typing and Global Variables) are well-translated with natural Persian phrasing that reads fluently for academic audiences The explanation of JIT compilation mechanics in 'How and When it Works' is accurately translated with all bullet points and technical nuances preserved
⚠️ Markdown Syntax Errors (CRITICAL)
- 🔴 In the Multithreaded Loops section, the Persian translation adds 'from numba import jit' inside the @jit decorated update function code block, which is not present in the English source code cell
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Sharp Bits section title: 'نکات ظریف' is acceptable but 'نکات تیز' or 'نکات مهم' might better capture the idiomatic meaning of 'sharp bits' (referring to tricky/problematic aspects). However, 'نکات ظریف' is defensible.
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Typing section: 'تعیین نوع' (type determination) is used instead of a more standard 'استنتاج نوع' (type inference), which would better match the technical concept discussed in the section body where 'type inference' is the key topic. The body correctly uses 'استنتاج نوع' creating an inconsistency between heading and content.
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Multithreaded Loops: The translation adds 'from numba import jit' to the code cell for the update function, which does not appear in the English source at that location. This is a spurious addition that could confuse readers since jit was already imported earlier.
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Global Variables section: 'متغیرهای سراسری' correctly follows the glossary mapping for global variables, which is good. No issue here - this is a strength.
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How and When it Works: The phrase 'کششهای مستقل' used in Multithreaded Loops for 'independent draws' is acceptable but 'نمونههای مستقل' or 'مقادیر تصادفی مستقل' would be more natural in Persian statistical writing.
🔍 Diff Quality
| Check | Status |
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| Scope Correct | ✅ |
| Position Correct | ✅ |
| Structure Preserved | ✅ |
| Heading-map Correct | ✅ |
| Overall | 10/10 |
Summary: The translation target document is correctly updated to reflect all structural and content changes from the English source, with the heading map accurately revised to match the new section hierarchy.
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Pull request overview
Automated translation sync for the Persian (fa) version of the Numba lecture, aligning content/structure with upstream “Small edits”.
Changes:
- Restructures and rewrites portions of
lectures/numba.md(new headings, revised explanations, timing “warm up” pattern, updated examples). - Updates document labels/anchors and some code cells to match the updated narrative.
- Updates translation sync state metadata (
source-sha,synced-at, tool version, section count).
Reviewed changes
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lectures/numba.md |
Updates the translated Numba lecture content, section structure, and example code/timing snippets to match upstream edits. |
.translate/state/numba.md.yml |
Bumps translation sync metadata (source SHA/date, tool version, section count). |
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lectures/numba.md:116
- In the
qmexample, the loop body is indented less than the rest of the function body. As written, this will raise anIndentationError(or execute outside the loop, depending on how whitespace is interpreted). Indentx[t+1] = ...to match the 4-space indentation used elsewhere inside the function.
x = np.empty(n+1)
x[0] = x0
for t in range(n):
x[t+1] = α * x[t] * (1 - x[t])
return x
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The update function docstring has leading/trailing spaces (" Updates household wealth. "), which will be preserved in rendered/help output. Consider removing the extra spaces (and, if keeping a docstring here, match the docstring style used elsewhere, e.g. lectures/python_oop.md:636-638).
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The multi-line compute_long_run_median_parallel signature indentation/parenthesis placement is inconsistent with other multi-line defs in this repo (e.g. lectures/numba.md later uses aligned parameters in compute_call_price_parallel). Reformatting to the same alignment style would improve readability and reduce diffs in future translation syncs.
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Automated Translation Sync
This PR contains automated translations from QuantEcon/lecture-python-programming.
Source PR
#526 - Small edits
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